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Hi jordin! What is this. Seriously. What is it. No, I'd really like to know. I'm curious now. This has no semblance of plot whatsoever, no indicator of anything, it's ...

Hi meth, I can see why nobody'd review this. Again, like your chapters before, this is seriously very boring. Absolutely nothing fruitful to plot or character development happens, save for ...

Hey Meth! I find myself drawn to the next chapters... oh look, our little protagonist starts to doubt himself. That's cute. Why would he start to doubt himself? He's been ...

Hey meth! ED has kindly done all the grammar for me, so I'll be pointing out how utterly ridiculous this chapter is. No amount of willing suspension of disbelief will ...

Hi meth! Again, grammar has been covered before me. No need to point that out. Now this chapter I liked more. And yet, I have to agree, it works even ...

Hey meth! I haven't reviewed this novel of yours, so let's do that! I see all the other reviewers have focused a lot on the grammar, especially Shady down there, ...

Hi there BlackXCat! You haven't finished this, you say. And yet you post this on YWS. There's not a lot to go on. If we consider this a full chapter ...

Hey there Tenshi! I'll be dropping a small comment on this. I liked it! This is cool. I like how you introduce the winter, the description is rather neat. Dark ...

Lo, the second part of this terribly intriguing Batman fanfiction. Hey BlackNether12, let's get down to business then. Annnnd now we have our cunning detective on the scene. Of course. ...

Hi BlackNether12! You mentioned you wanted this murdered, thus, I comply. My main issue with this was the flow. The use of commas/full-stops really jarred this and made me have ...

Hi rhea, welcome to YWS. Nice username. Hellenist references are always cool. Though of course, I doubt you actually meant this as a Hellenist reference. Now, after reading your work, ...

Hi Saterdays! I'm not getting this. Prose poetry is cool, but I don't really see why you chose not to go for line breaks in this one. I for one ...

Hi Tizpi! Welcome to the family! Hope you're enjoying YWS. Well, anyways. Onto the review! There are unfortunately several grammatical errors in this, but I'll get to those later. First, ...

Heyhowdyhey, again, BlackPandemonium! AHA. I was right. Much more modern voice here. Indeed, a sassy (?) female main character. Modern times too. Crapsack world, or at least so it seems, ...

Heyhowdyhey DarkPandemonium! This is definitely an interesting prologue. You have me hooked (mainly because I'm a sucker for any religious/fantasy prose). I like how you gave your prologue a main ...