Caerulean

Uh...You have some grammatical errors. But, otherwise, this is great! This piece justified the reason why I prefer reading Dramatic Poetry here in YWS. - - - - - - ...

I'm gonna comment on this part... “Stop that already, I know." Shouldn't 'I know' be separated from 'Stop that already'? Anyway, with the use of 'damsel', it seemed like it ...

This is something catchy and I think you are excited of posting your idea on the site and receiving remarks but you should have included Chapter 1 in the same ...

Nice work. I could slightly relate with the story. (But, I never lost feelings for her) Anyways, I don't actually think that you have to name or describe your characters ...

Uh...I just noticed some errors that are not really a big deal. First, the 'blooddrunk' thing - Shouldn't it be 'blood-drunk'? Note the dash in between. Also, the capitalization/ I ...

This poem is good and powerful! Sorry if my skills for criticizing aren't really good. I barely review another person's work with lots of words, like I almost everyone here ...

The title really intrigued me. I was just looking for something to read... I hate that number and all that is Evil. Anyways... "So violent!" That was the first comment ...

Thanks! Thanks because I wasn't really able to find something to read to get points for reviewing (except the poems I read earlier) until I was able to find this ...

Cool words! :) But wait, "powerlessness"? Hihi, it's going to be a new word for me to learn. When I was reading your poem and when I came up with ...

Well, I understood your poem though it was weird for me to go like this: After reading the poem - "I don't understand" After reading the reviews downwards - "I ...

This chapter was great! So as the first one :) Anyways, I didn't understand most of the Spanish words but after I went on with the story I thought that ...

A story of two best friends being boyfriend and girlfriend is common. Though, these kinds of stories never go boring! :D It was a really nice story! Was it in ...

Loved the poem! It reminds me of my friend who loves to write poems almost the same as how you write yours. This poem has its own sense of creativity ...