CadmiumAntimony

Thanks for the review. Yeah, I grew up reading a lot of Dr. Seuss and watching movies based on his works so it rubs off in my writing sometimes. I ...

Thanks for you're in-depth review. I agree some areas could've been a little more touched up, but you live and you learn right. I will be sure to keep your ...

Great collage of quotes. I didn't recognize all of them but a few like "To be or not to be..." stood out. What inspired you to write this? I'm interested ...

I accidentally submitted a blank comment so I typed this out just so you know why I commented on my own work lol.

Thanks, I didn't expect this to get a review so soon. I didn't intentionally write the poem as a metaphor but now that you've mentioned it, I can see what ...

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Wow, this is great. Your poem reflects a deep emotional pain and a profound sense of familial disconnection. From my end, it seems that the narrator is expressing feelings of ...