CSheperd

That's pretty good. I liked how it was a flashback. It makes me think about going back to school and daydream of my own summer mischievities. Maybe for the thing ...

My honest opinion of your story was that it was well written ad the descriptions were pretty vivid. You truly painted it out for anyone who reads it. On the ...

This story, I have to say, was a pretty difficult read. You seemed to jump perspective quite a bit from third to first, especially when you were trying to show ...

I thought the overall description and personifacation in the story was what stood out most about it. It was very vibrant look into something as simple as a house fire. ...

I tend to disdain romantic stories but i thought this was pretty good. The character connections were pretty great as was the setting for the story. It gave me a ...

I thought the plot was pretty good, i'm a big fan of the life after people concept. The description really painted the picture for me, and i loved the way ...

First off, i'm not sure what you were trying to convey with this, second off it really had no point. It had style to it but i really don't get ...

I thought it was a decent story. You changed things up at some points though, make which portion of the MC that was injured more clearer. Another thing i didn't ...

Man, i gotta say i have yet to be dissapointed whenever i read any of your works. I liked the irony that as many able bodied people attempted to off ...

This really just seems to be filler for another story. There wasn't much of a plot other than some martin scorsese type bandits chattin over cuts. If you decide to ...

the girl who reviewed you wasn't far off from the truth. I'm not gonna get on you for grammar or anything like that. I couldn't really finish it. It could ...

i thought it was damn good. Each character was well identified with their own personal traits and they complimented and foiled each other pretty damn good. It was a good ...

So i did not read the first six parts but i have to say this part was not bad. it was a good nastolgic feelng there at the beginning, the ...

Pretty good, pretty pretty good. It just needs some polishing and thats it. I won't talk about grammar, only chodes really get on what spell check can solve. Unlike most ...

I couldn't really finish it, with that said i can't really give good criticism on the story. The whole thing all and all is a little bit flat. It didn't ...