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CJeanene13

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: To cry.

    I loved the emotion and the dramatic scenes that I could see in my head. The mistakes have been made above. I was kind of confused about when she shot ...

    Sep 29, 2008
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Last Dance

    What ya'll think?

    Sep 25, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sighs

    Well, I was kinda depressed and sad. I felt alone. So, I just sat down one day and wrote. Something I do when I need to express something. Thanks for ...

    Sep 24, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: To...?

    I love how you explained every word and made a comparison to it. I loved the emotion felt the way you describe the feelings for love. Again, I agree with ...

    Sep 24, 2008
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Deleted.

    Holy Moly! This was addicting to me. I loved the suspense and the mystery. I have a few questions though. How old is Sophia and are they poor or rich? ...

    Sep 23, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sighs

    Thanks for the great reviews. It will help me tons! Thanks again!

    Sep 23, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I never told you I loved you

    I really loved the feeling and implications. I agree with what was said above. But overall it was great.

    Sep 23, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: I will Remember

    I really like the intimate aspect to it. I loved how you worded your sentences. I love the way you describe your feelings and how and where you feel you ...

    Sep 23, 2008


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