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CJeanene13

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: To cry.

    I loved the emotion and the dramatic scenes that I could see in my head. The mistakes have been made above. I was kind of confused about when she shot ...

    Sep 29, 2008
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Last Dance

    What ya'll think?

    Sep 25, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sighs

    Well, I was kinda depressed and sad. I felt alone. So, I just sat down one day and wrote. Something I do when I need to express something. Thanks for ...

    Sep 24, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: To...?

    I love how you explained every word and made a comparison to it. I loved the emotion felt the way you describe the feelings for love. Again, I agree with ...

    Sep 24, 2008
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Deleted.

    Holy Moly! This was addicting to me. I loved the suspense and the mystery. I have a few questions though. How old is Sophia and are they poor or rich? ...

    Sep 23, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sighs

    Thanks for the great reviews. It will help me tons! Thanks again!

    Sep 23, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I never told you I loved you

    I really loved the feeling and implications. I agree with what was said above. But overall it was great.

    Sep 23, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: I will Remember

    I really like the intimate aspect to it. I loved how you worded your sentences. I love the way you describe your feelings and how and where you feel you ...

    Sep 23, 2008


The capacity of human beings to bore one another seems to be vastly greater than that of any other animal.
— H. L. Mencken