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Hi there! So, I thought this was really good. However, I do have two complaints. 1. Disconnection. Throughout the poem, your were speaking with the father and his daughter was ...

So, if you don't mind, I'm going to do more of a conceptual review than anything else. First off: repetition. I think the repetition in the second half works very ...

So... I liked this. A lot. I don't quite know what to say on it yet, so I think that I'm going to come back with a review. You kind ...

FINALLY. I get to actually see something you wrote. It's crazy. Okay. Anyways. Onto an attempt at a critique. So, I think I like this. I'm still not entirely decided, ...

Okay. I'm going to give a really brief review, because I should be doing homework and I'm just lazy. Mostly because I'm lazy. Anyways. I like this-- it's short, but ...

Okay. I'm lazy and terrible with prose, so here's a quick-nothing-but-opinion-review. I'm lame like that. Anyways-- I definitely am liking your character and your obviously write extremely well. I wou

Boo! I told you to expect this, so it should be no surprise. Now, onto the destruction. The first half of this is extremely prosey. I think that you could ...

Okay. I'm sorry-- gonna review both, don't worry. But I wanted to leave a short note on this one first. First, I think that what you were going for is ...

Okay. Perhaps a change of title is needed. It appears that I have distracted people with my awesome. Okay. Now, onto the actual review. I found this pretty interesting-- the ...

Hi Ed. I'm here. Completely UNrequested. Deal with it. :) My cheeks were slit, and handcuffs locked inside (of my tongue), hooking my words to your wrists, where you just ...

Hi there. :) So, I'm finally here. I'm a bit (okay, really)sick and am a bit bleary eyed here, but ready to review. So, this may be due to my ...

Hi there :) So, first of all, there were quite a few spelling errors/grammar mistakes. I'll catch those in bold in all the quoted pieces, but I would suggest using ...

Hey, there Eli! You're my 450th review! :D Sorry-- studying for a Czech test tomorrow, but I've been meaning to get to this for a while, so it might be ...

Okay: so, a short review on this, if you don't mind too terribly. Sorry it took me so long to get to this. So, I liked this; some parts of ...

Hi there! :) So, gorgeous imagery in this-- I love the simplicity of the tone. I do think that there are some things that could be worked on though: next ...