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First of all, I adore this. If this is your first attempt at poetry, then I can't wait to read more. You don't want to hear my first attempts. ;) ...

Excellent- it was really simply put, but it held quite a bit in it, and it was powerful all the same. I love your language, though I will say that ...

Ahh, "Pendulum" :) Okay, I hope you don't mind too terribly, but I might do a little line-picking-aparting. :) It's back to staring at the world through a dusty bus ...

Personally, I think this was excellent. While reading it, I was kind of going, "What the hell is this?" but as I got towards the end, I finally understood, and ...

I actually don't think I've REVIEWED this one before, though I've definitely seen it. :) Okay, so onto the actual review now :) I love beginning. It's very simple and ...

Hi there: I'm sorry it's taken me so long to get to this. I just didn't really know what to say about it. I still don't. BUT, I'm going to ...

First of all, I love your work. I've told you before, but I just love the style with which you write-- it's always very simple, but so effective and weaves ...

So, I think I've seen this one before. But I love it. Even when I'm reading something of yours anew, it still feels like I'm experiencing it, like it's going ...

First of all: powerful piece. I love the imagery, the straight forward and blunt presentation... it's all very effective. Great job on that :) I DO think that maybe you ...

Hi there :) Welcome to the site! So, onward to the review- Honestly, I really wasn't crazy about the ending. It didn't hold my attention for too long, and I ...

First of all: powerful piece. You have some excellent imagery and set the scene very succinctly. I think that maybe your rhythm could be a little smoother in spots, but ...

Hi there :) So, I just want to start off with a little bit of gushing. Cause, again, this was freakin' amazing. Overall, this piece was really strong, and had ...

This is excellent- you have a great sense of repetition, and your imagery was spot on. The language itself was beautiful, and you had a great medley of images with ...

I have had personal experience with someone that I call my "Evil Ex-Step-Mother" and so can definitely relate to this poem. Tears flowing fast through my face In order to ...

Hiya there Skins :) SO I've been meaning to get to this for just about forever. I'm dearly sorry that I haven't before-- it's been sitting on my Reading List ...