ButtercupRose

Hi thank you so much, sorry this is really late, I haven't been on in a while. I tried to fix it....... I don't know if it sounds better, if ...

Thank you so much for your reviews on both this chapter and the next :)

Hi, thanks for the review! I changed a few things, and was wondering if you would mind rereading it and commenting your opinion? :)

Hi, thanks for the review! I changed a few things, and was wondering if you would mind rereading it and commenting your opinion? :)

Hi, I changed a few things (I don't even know if its noticable) but would you mind rereading it and commenting whether I fixed my mistakes, I've been trying to ...

Hi, thanks for the review! I changed a few things, and was wondering if you would mind rereading it and commenting your opinion? :)

Hi, thanks for the review! I changed a few things, it you wouldn't mind rereading it... I know its been a while though :)

Can I just say that this just put my thoughts to words? Everything I've been thinking and all the things whizzing in my mind is in this! AMAZING!!! I dont ...

Beautiful. Just a little confusing at times. It was unique and interesting. it kept my interest the entire time. But the stanzas are a little weird. I'm not sure if ...

I like the beginning, its very descriptive. But its a little too long and doesn't leave me hanging enough. If you posted the next part, I might not be as ...

Thanks for the review! I'll be sure to proofread, when I wrote this, I was excited to get my idea in print and sorta forgot about all grammar rules. Then ...