ButterFlyInk

I love it even though its a dark theme. I do understand the dangers of depression and this poem was a simplistic way of describing what happens when it takes ...

Thank you :)

version 2 is simply beautiful :)

There was a perfectly straight red line on my arm. You couldn’t have gotten it straighter if you fused me to a ruler. Perfectly round beads of blood lay still ...

Thank you for your critique. Some of this was rushed...God bless random inspiration.... I forgot that I had damn in there. :P This is actually my first long dialogue piece ...

Thank you Jamie_Rocks for also taking your time to review and edit this. And yes I am planning on edit it and furthering the story. I don't know where the ...

Thank you Avens, for taking your time to go over most of this piece. I would like to apologize to you, because I did not look at the forum rules ...