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Burrow

Jack

  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Darkness.

    I understand that feeling, keep the writing up!! :)

    Nov 4, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, Other Re: The Complulsive

    I loved it!!

    Nov 4, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Burrow.1.

    Thanks, when I find time I will go over it!!

    Nov 4, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Burrow.6.

    haha ok

    Nov 4, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Burrow.6.

    Thanks, you should get some more in about an hour!!

    Nov 4, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Burrow.2.

    Thanks again!!

    Nov 4, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Burrow.1.

    Thanks, I will try today to fix the story, after I study :( for exams :(

    Nov 4, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Burrow.6.

    Thanks!!

    Nov 4, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Burrow.1.

    Thanks for the review, a lot of the stuff that you went over. The things you said like he kept repeating he didn't care. That was an aspect of his ...

    Nov 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Burrow.6.

    Thanks!!

    Nov 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Burrow.6.

    Thanks for the review. Though Burrow isn't actually an alien he is a human, walking through a alien Ghetto. But either way thanks for the review!!

    Nov 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Other Re: The Copious Few (First 5 chapters)

    sweet!!!

    Nov 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Burrow.5.

    Thanks, I plan to write some more this afternoon.

    Nov 3, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Racism

    Yes i agree, I was angry and stubborn, you are right, I might try rewriting it

    Nov 3, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Racism

    Sorry, you are right. I'm sorry...

    Nov 2, 2014


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