Burrow

Thanks, and it does actually say that he hits his head against the tree, any way thanks for the suggestions.

Thanks, and the Black dog is a saying, its also know as depression.

That was amazing, and I am sorry to you that you got that from someone...

I agree with Eli

Loved it.

I would like to write a review, but there isn't anything to fix. Best poem I have ever read-period! great job!

Love it, I promise a review tomorrow!

I agree

Who hasn't, I think I read the last book, 7 times, and the battle like 20 !!

haha, it was almost as good, but no one will ever be as good!

Thanks!

Oh and also, I wrote this chapter like 4 weeks ago, for NaNo so I have been applying show don't tell more and so on.

Thanks for he review, as for the font I posted it on another computer, like a apple, one and it all stuffed up sorry

That's fine, I loved it!

Thanks for the help, could you help me how to change the dialogue, because when ever I try, people complain about info dumps....