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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Breathe in and breathe out

    Thankyou for the poem your right it what you say, I will look into fixing it haha :) Thanks a heap

    Dec 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Seek no longer

    Thanks a heap I will look into fixing it :)

    Dec 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: her name was ciera.

    Great review for first time! ^

    Dec 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Fanfiction Re: Beckendorf

    Brings back memories :D

    Dec 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Seek no longer

    Thank you :)

    Dec 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Seek no longer

    haha yeah :)

    Dec 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Seek no longer

    Thankyou, that review made my day :)

    Dec 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Seek no longer

    Thanks for the review! and yeah that was what I was kinda trying to get across :)

    Dec 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I Hate everything about you

    Thankyou :)

    Dec 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I Hate everything about you

    I think I wrote it, like I was mad at me for ever thinking of it

    Dec 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I Hate everything about you

    Thankyou for this I really appreciate it :)

    Dec 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Names then Numbers

    You are a very good reviewer!

    Dec 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Names then Numbers

    I have to agree with basically all you said except two things, itnever went t numbers, it was always people got names then when they ran out of names the ...

    Dec 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Names then Numbers

    Thanks for the suggestions :D and thanks for the review :)

    Dec 8, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Breathe in and breathe out

    I agree with you except for the last line you fixed, I made it that way because I like having breathe in the line it sounds write to me. But ...

    Dec 8, 2016


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