Burrow

Wow.... so short, but so good, I love it. It makes you remember of when you were younger, and what it was like, it makes you smile, then bang, its ...

I like this, its interesting, and has potential. But I think you need to reveal a small bigger picture in the first chapter, to keep people wanting to read, it ...

Well like every time you surprise me, I love it again and it provided a lot of useful info, I like how you show kat and Liam start to get ...

I love it just as much as the last one, I still love the idea, and skinner mentioned the one think I was wondering, will it run out, it makes ...

That's a heck of a good story, congrats, is was well written and hardly any mistakes, and it was full of action the whole time, you just wanted to red ...

Well I really love your idea, and you seem to be developing it well, better than I could, I love your different characters and your storyline makes me want to ...

I loved it a lot, Its exciting and full of unanswered thinks, that make you want to keep reading, Thumbs up!!! I couldn't find many errors which is a plus, ...

That amazing probably the most I have ever read on a computer, it was exciting the hole time and what a good story line, the different characters reminded me of ...

I really like this almost as much as the first chapter, its really nice how you to the flashback think, its getting exciting, flashback! then you just have to keep ...

I like it, its like something I have never really seen before, it rhymes well and it keeps you interested the hole way through, and its really cool how you ...

This is kind of interesting, it is interesting how you seem to building up as you go through the poem and you slowly start to get it more intense, it ...

It sounds like it will become very exciting, it has all the thinks that make a good book, there though seems to be a large amount of sadness in this ...