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Re: The Shadow
I can understand the confusion, there are somethings i frankly forgot to put in. I'll be sure to patch things up soon. Thanks for the feedback ^^
Feb 4, 2021 -
Re: Shock
Wow, that was the most detailed review I have ever seen. Thanks a lot man! Some clarity for the confusions you had: - The backstory was there to have a ...
Dec 18, 2020 -
Re: Shock
Thanks for pointing those out! Typos happen I guess.
Oct 31, 2020 -
Re: Shock
Try reading the original story. Twould make more sense. Plus its fun.
Oct 30, 2020 - Re: The Unexpected Gift Sep 21, 2020
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Re: A Stormy Evening
I explained the supernatural aspect in a reply below, and I am glad you liked it. :D
Sep 4, 2020 -
Re: Friendly kidnappers V2
I think he just wanted to a complete overhaul of the original.
Aug 26, 2020 -
Re: A Stormy Evening
I see what you mean with the childish tone, however, I initially wrote this in Word and When I put it up on the YWS upload page, Grammarly ran a ...
Aug 26, 2020 -
Re: A Stormy Evening
You sure seem to love your semi-colons XD
Aug 25, 2020
