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  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: The Shadow

    I can understand the confusion, there are somethings i frankly forgot to put in. I'll be sure to patch things up soon. Thanks for the feedback ^^

    Feb 4, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Shock

    Wow, that was the most detailed review I have ever seen. Thanks a lot man! Some clarity for the confusions you had: - The backstory was there to have a ...

    Dec 18, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Shock

    Thanks for pointing those out! Typos happen I guess.

    Oct 31, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Shock

    Try reading the original story. Twould make more sense. Plus its fun.

    Oct 30, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: The Unexpected Gift

    Sep 21, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: A Stormy Evening

    I explained the supernatural aspect in a reply below, and I am glad you liked it. :D

    Sep 4, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Friendly kidnappers V2

    I think he just wanted to a complete overhaul of the original.

    Aug 26, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: A Stormy Evening

    I see what you mean with the childish tone, however, I initially wrote this in Word and When I put it up on the YWS upload page, Grammarly ran a ...

    Aug 26, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: A Stormy Evening

    You sure seem to love your semi-colons XD

    Aug 25, 2020


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