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I have one question in regards to your new ideas for reviewing. What is happening? And I don't say this in a necessarily good or bad way, good stories sometimes ...

This story is very intriguing, and it feels like it has a good amount of weight and potential to it. So, first off I'll nitpick a little bit with some ...

Hi Dustbunny. The only real grammatical error I found in this was a quotation mark in the wrong place, after this sentence- 'Gordo flipped open a file filled with pages ...

Wow, this was great, truly beyond words. It perfectly summarizes and expresses how writing is, and how art is in general. Artists often go through such pain explained in this ...

A great little emotional flash fiction! So, no nitpicking for me since I don't normally do that and other people have already done that. Here are the good things; Your ...

This is a very intriguing little realistic short. I liked it a lot. The only problem is, you said this turned into a matter of life and death. It wasn't ...

An interesting poem. One of my suggestions would be to lose the punctuation, in my opinion it sort of makes the writing more choppy, unless you're going for choppy. If ...

I really like how this story reads. It was a bit of a struggle to get used to how you use the first person point of view. And what I ...