Bugslake

Thanks, I hope we reconcile as well. And if you knew this person, you would realize that it is his voice that helps him hide his emotions. And I tend ...

Message me about what times we can chat. I have a pirate pad.

Thank you. I didn't want to really make the characters detailed because its sort of personal. I will get right on fixing it though.

Thank you. I didn't want to really make the characters detailed because its sort of personal. I will get right on fixing it though.

This was the cutest thing that I've ever read, so adorable. I just loved both of the characters in here and Cole is just so perfect for her. You are ...

Thanks, I'll take more time to look it over. As I said before my computer glitched and I wasn't exactly able to fix everything because it was posted after it ...

No problem and I see you've fixed it.

Thank for the review. Most mistakes happen do to writing half awake.

Still editing the next part. I'm so glad someone had an interest in this. And yeah it's building up to a couple of huge things. And I'm trying to aim ...

Thank you for your compliments. After a lot of harsh criticism it can be hard to keep writing. I also tend to develop feelings of the characters as the story ...

No, if you take that part out it will help more than it can hurt. It was unnecessary.

I will definitely take your fixes into consideration.

Most of my mistakes are do to writing before bed. I'll try and fix them. I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks. I'm glad you like it. I'll use your title because I've tried to make one up, but I haven't gotten one as good as yours.

My immediate family member was able to know she had cancer right after she got her mammogram. Then they did a very nasty biopsy that took a while to get ...