Buddha

I really liked this, the flow is very nice and your simple, straightforward way of describing the emotions really pulled me in. I'm not really good at critiquing poetry, nor ...

pretty good... but it still moves too fast. The whole of the story Should have had enough detail to take up several chapters. Slow down!!!! “I think I know why,” ...

I thought it was pretty good, but yes, there were some spacing errors. You could probably do some grammar checking also and I was kind of confused about who was ...

I thought it was pretty good. I liked the style of writing (I'm a biggie on writing style) and although there are some spelling errors I liked how you really ...