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BrumalHunter

The Astral Plane

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Last Spell 1.2

    You're welcome! Along with being thorough, I figure being honest helps people improve more than just always complimenting them. Measured praise is necessary too, but compliments will feel more earned ...

    Sep 11, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Last Spell 1.1

    I'm glad it's been of use to you! I try to always be thorough in my reviews, since anything worth doing ought to be done well, and people receive enough ...

    Sep 11, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Fantasy Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 1.1

    You're very welcome! And steal away. ;P

    Sep 9, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: (LMSVI) The Ruptured Shadow: Prologue

    No worries! As long as my review is of any help, even if it's just one comment, I'm happy. (Although, if it had been just one comment, I wouldn't have ...

    Sep 9, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: A letter to my mother tongue

    You're most welcome! ^_^

    Oct 3, 2018
  • Article / Essay » Culture, Realistic Re: A chain breaks at its strongest

    That explains quite a lot, thanks! By fluff, I meant many of the remarks that carry emotional weight, rather than elaborating on your argument, such as during the second to ...

    Sep 29, 2018
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Daylight Companion

    That's wonderful news! It's always nice to hear your review helped, especially since we're all striving towards improving our writing. You're most welcome!

    Sep 20, 2018
  • Other » Other, General Re: Neglected by Nature

    You're most welcome! And yes, I shall hold thumbs for you!

    Sep 19, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: and i jumped

    Oh, that changes things. And that's wonderful - both that you're enjoying your course and that my review was helpful! I don't often review poetry, so I'm still somewhat unsure ...

    Sep 12, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Black and White (Revised) - Part Four

    I was snickering so badly this entire time! I obviously knew Seth was in love with Ross, but it was hilarious to see you keep focusing on Ross as the ...

    Sep 7, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Black and White (Revised) - Part Three

    I forgive your nerdiness. XD Speaking of forgiveness, I must ask for yours with regards to the rollercoaster of a work this is proving to be for you. I'm not ...

    Sep 7, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Black and White (Revised) - Part Two

    Yes, you are back! I'm quite enjoying this review so far, I admit! What can I say? I'm a fantasy guy through and through. The Sphinx has consistently been one ...

    Sep 7, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Black and White (Revised) - Part One

    Sorry for the lateness in replying to your reviews, Fox! I meant to reply to this one shortly after you submitted it, but then I got busy. Since all four ...

    Sep 7, 2018
  • Other » Other, Other Re: A Hunter's Guide to Ethereal Bacteria

    I'm reviewing short things, since I only start reviewing after ten, and I have until midnight each day to complete one. Your old works happen to be of the desired ...

    Sep 6, 2018
  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Fate

    Ah, then yes, you're perfectly justified. Usually, we'd put an author's note at the start of the story, but you had no way of knowing this. I'm pleased you found ...

    Sep 4, 2018


"You, who have all the passion for life that I have not? You, who can love and hate with a violence impossible to me? Why you are as elemental as fire and wind and wild things..."
— Gone With the Wind