Bromthebard

This song sounds quite good as far as message is concerned, my question is, What style of music are you planning on this being? I do love it, it has ...

Normally, I don't read or like poetry, but this is very good. It's very descriptive and vivid. I see all the images you are trying to convey. Your wording is ...

I don't see how you say that your stories suck, but I think they are amazing. Very gripping. To quote another comment about this You continue to amaze me! I ...

Very good. I love the descriptions of things, the casual writing style, the attitude of the narrator, it's a very good piece. I love how you set it up, and ...

Oh, my God, AMAZING, it was very descriptive, very detailed, and your use of words that are not in the average person's vocabulary amazes me. The fact that you have ...

First of all, very beautiful. The images you gave me were so vivid. We have a beautiful sky here. One for taking pictures, holding memories, forgetting, loving, then dying. , ...

Very cute. I do agree with the above comment slightly, it's not that you have too much dialogue, it's that you have too little of the other stuff, the amount ...

Very good, you got me hooked on the story. It flowed good, I really can't suggest anything about transitions. One thing is, though, “Good,” said the soldier. Now face the ...

Wow, really good, I honestly can not find anything wrong with this work on first read. I suggest to keep going with this. I think if you finish this, and ...

Very good, your wording was great. I suggest putting more detail in it, though. I also suggest, somewhere in there, adding what is happening to the doctor during this, like ...

very good, lots of good details, good character development, you just need to keep going and finish the story I personally would do a fight in the story. Your a ...

I agree with what the other people said, it is a little too short. It needs to be longer with more of a plot and more details. But, what i ...

A very good story. It is very well constructed. It had a lot of details. I was amazed at your story. Keep writing and posting your stuff. You write better ...

I like this its short and beautiful. It has a lot of detail for something so short. Good ending, too. -Bromthebard :)

This is your fellow New Age Inkling, A good story. I agree with the other post about the words that need fixing. Also, I think you should make the end ...