BrokenAngel

Hey, I like it a lot, yes I do not like Twlight but i'm not going to bash the poem because of that. I think it's all good wording and ...

Gg127 thanks I will.

Hey, I love this poem so much. You have good choice in words!

Hey, I think it's good and all but your telling I think you shouls tell more and less telling.

Hey, I loved it! It sounds so real and in the first stanza it painted a picture for me! i loved it keep writing :)

Hey I figured since you reviewed my first poem I wanted to review your's, I think it's really good and all but i think you should make it more clear ...

Thanks guys for your reviews. I know I had made a lot of spelling errors and I will change that, I had to leave for school. But I'm glad for ...