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Re: Empty
Hello, :) Well, I can easily say I like the emotion behind this. A feeling of nothing and an emptiness being an unbearable weight. But I don't know if it ...
Dec 5, 2014 -
Re: A Letter from Revenge
Ah, sweet, sweet revenge.... I liked this. I really like the easy flow and the bit of fantasy in there ( the dragon and the sorcerer) really appealed to me. ...
Oct 28, 2014 -
Re: Romeo & Juliet: Instant Messaging Edition
This has to be the most ridiculous thing I have ever read in my life... and I love it! Never in my life did I think I'd ever smile nor ...
Sep 16, 2014 -
Re: Take Me To Peace
I agree, you have a very soft vocabulary and I found myself whispering the words as I read. Like if I read it in my normal tone, the words would ...
Aug 23, 2014 -
Re: The Border of Light, Three
I like it. your main character is interesting. My critique is this: You suffer the same dreaded flaw 90% of fiction/fantasy/action/supernatural/ etc. writers do. The issue is "show, don tell." ...
Jul 1, 2014