BreeTaylor

Hello, :) Well, I can easily say I like the emotion behind this. A feeling of nothing and an emptiness being an unbearable weight. But I don't know if it ...

Ah, sweet, sweet revenge.... I liked this. I really like the easy flow and the bit of fantasy in there ( the dragon and the sorcerer) really appealed to me. ...

This has to be the most ridiculous thing I have ever read in my life... and I love it! Never in my life did I think I'd ever smile nor ...

I agree, you have a very soft vocabulary and I found myself whispering the words as I read. Like if I read it in my normal tone, the words would ...

I like it. your main character is interesting. My critique is this: You suffer the same dreaded flaw 90% of fiction/fantasy/action/supernatural/ etc. writers do. The issue is "show, don tell." ...