Booshian

Thank you so much!

I know the topic of body image is an overused one,but that's where the idea of the house metaphor came from. It's not just a whiny oh poor me kind ...

Thank you very much for your kind review!, Could you give me examples of the wording issues? personally I feel that searching for the poems meaning is the most important ...

Thank you very much! Yes, I think there is a little bit of house keeping to be done with this poem. This is a first draft I wrote at two ...

Thank you very much! :)

Thank you so much for your kind review! Yeah I'm a bit funny with punctuation, I'm a huge Emily Dickinson fan so I quite like using punctuation unconventionally. But this ...

Thank you for your feedback! With the punctuation and the whole poem itself, I wanted it to look really cramped and close knit to mirror it's subject. I'll change it ...

Why thank you! Yeah, I usually keep them quite short and sweet. I think it's best to have a short and powerful poem rather than a kind of long rambley ...

Look, it's your own little masterpiece so if you're confident that that's The way it should be, then don't touch it :)

don't worry about it, im the exact same. It all comes with practice I suppose. The hardest part is being able to articulate your thoughts into writing and you've clearly ...

Well it was very cool! a technique that is seldom used but very impressive. No problemo!

You're very welcome :) thanks!

Hello there! Thank you for the lovely in depth review. By the line "your structure, my prison" I was referring to a personal feeling I have experienced a lot in ...

I'm so glad you enjoyed it, I never knew anyone else would connect with this because it was just genuinely what I was feeling at the time put into some ...

Aw thank you so much! I'm glad you connected with it. I didn't want the poem to be too serious so I threw in those words to make it appear ...