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Hey RieOngaku, First off you have the wrong section. There is a section for lyrics! Which this definitely is a song not a poem. As for the song it was ...

Hey Ultimate, Here's are a few mistakes : She hoped that he brung her to safety brought The land stood quite, under the blanket of darkness that expanded around the ...

Hey TAZmania, To be honestly this story wasn't that much of a shock to me. Instead of putting detail and feeling into the story, you just told me a quick ...

Hey Maddee, Not much to say other then a few mistakes, body shaking violently, uncontrolably. Uncontrollably Oozing chrimson liquid dripping down onto the dusty ground, Crimson I turned in the ...

Hey Subjectblue, I loved your rhyming! You have no grammar or spelling mistakes as far as I can see. There was one rhyme I really loved. The grim walls are ...

Hey popatemyheart, I only saw one mistake! Here it is : While doctors move my insides. I think you meant this the me a comma. like nothing As for the ...

Why are people so stupid ? Why are people so mean ? They poke and prod comma And just won't stop until they hear you scream period Judgmental all day ...

Hey Charcoalspacewolfman, I started out my walk with only a few possessions and started off down the road. In a little while, I started tearing up and I had to ...

Hey Creative, It was a nice piece just I think you have something messed up. You spell out numbers less than or equal to ten. I had to measure it ...

Hey WelcomingException! freckle’s that ran across his nose I don’t think you need an apstrophy in freckles. I heard you were in town comma and had to invite you for ...

Hey Demoness, Empty Hearted : I felt like this was going to be a witty piece, but then you rhymed not with not... It just ruined it for me personally. ...

Hey Sarahjane97, I do agree with everyone else, we need more information. I felt like she was probably your mother. I liked the poem as whole. It was on the ...

Hey Wolfdra! I liked your story it was interesting. I've been watching Law and Order SVU all night so it kind of reminded me of that. You should try adding ...

Hey Chrstianwriter, The story seems like something they would play on ABC Family. I don't know if thats a complement, but it isn't bad? I'm interested in why the girl ...

Hey beautiful! Rawr, I'm here to review as promised! Hello comma here I think. you[b who make me smile Makes To me you’re very dear I’ll hold u close without ...