BondGirl007

Hey, I thought I'd just hop in and tell you that you made a little typo. "Dizzy" you put as "Dzizy". Also, why is "round and round" in italics? Anyway, ...

This poem to me came across as a little on the creepy side. Like an obsessive, Silence of the Lambs type guy. I don't know if that's what you meant ...

So the advice I can give you is that, when writing poetry, things don't always have to rhyme. Sometimes it's better just to forget rhyming, then trying to force it ...

So, I don't think this is horrible, but on the other hand it's not exactly the most original piece on earth. The fear of your bite, From this line I'm ...

Hey Amy! This reminds me of the poetry I write on and off, but much better xD. Some of the rhymes feel a little flat, or forced, but overall I ...

Hey Pen! So first, it needs a lot of work. It's a good first draft, but it needs editing and some rewriting. But I'm going to go over the basic ...

Hey Gun, I'm not all that great at reviewing poetry, but I'll give it my best shot. So much left to stay...but of no use now. Did you mean Say? ...

Hey Classy! I'm here as you requested, so lets begin! “I love you.” It took me a while to figure out who was saying this, and also who it was ...

Wow. Great job with this, it's really good. My attention was kept throughout the entire piece, it's got a great flow to it. The descriptions are wonderful, and I enjoyed ...

Oh. My. God!!!! XDDDD Nutty that was pure AWESOME! I'm still giggling. As I was reading it, I could totally get this little tune in my head, and it makes ...

Hey Love, sorry it took me so long to get here, but I'm here. So lets get started! Very well written, you have a very easy style of writing, that ...

Oooh! I like this, it's a very good beginning. I now really want to read the rest, and that's a rarity for me, to find something I like and get ...

Hello, I'm Hope, and I will be reviewing today! (Lucky you) Now it's a little hard to critic such a short story, but I'll try my best. :) The beginning ...

Hey, Hope here! The man jumped at this, turning to bellow back into the woods, “Nothin’! Jus’…there’s a sorta bog ‘ere. Go ‘roundabouts, t’yer right, an’ I’ll meet up wi’ ...

Well, to start off I had a hard time reading this; the plot was not well defined, the characters were flat, and I didn't really like the main character.I also ...