BondGirl007

Hey Jasmine! This definitely is one of your better works, so far I like the main character, she's got spirit, and drive, which I really like. What you need to ...

Hey Leanna! So for your first crack at poetry, it's not all that bad, but I can see that you're a story writer just by the way you write. What ...

Hey AJ! First off welcome to YWS! I hope you'll like it here :). Now, it's quite short, which makes it a little tougher to review, but I'll just go ...

Well, this part is a little bit of a letdown after the last chapter you wrote, but it's not bad. It gives us a little bit of a look into ...

Hey Jasmine! Wow, I think this is some of the best writing you've done so far, I really like it. There are a few simple spelling mistakes that caught my ...

Hmmm, definitely interesting, and slightly creepy. What I want to suggest to you, and I noticed you do this with pretty much all your stories, is when you want to ...

Definitely better then the first chapter, the plot's rather cliche, but it's not too bad. I took out the book I was reading, Emma and flipped to where I left ...

I read the first chapter you did with this, and I'll say this one's better, but one thing that really bugs me is the main character. I don't feel any ...

Alright Jasmine, you're so on. Alright, so it seems like an okay prologue, the beginning I thought was pretty good, although I really disliked this line. I am not good-looking ...

Hey Ruin! First off welcome to YWS! I hope you'll like it here :). Now since this is so short, as Tiffany pointed out, it makes it harder to review. ...

Hey Angel! So first off, I agree with Knife about pieces written purely to process emotions. You have fallen into the biggest poetry pits, subject wise. "Can't he see that ...

Very funny Hiadel, I must say. Something very different from the normal teen romance stories you find here, which was nice. I'm with Snoink on that last part, at first ...

Hey there Caitlin! Now looking at it at first seems pretty huge and kind of turned me off of reading it, but once I did it wasn't bad :D. I ...

Hey there Living! Alright, so the subject is great, anything that's not about love, or depression I try to read. War is all around us, we hear about it all ...

Hey Pudin! I thought this was really cute. It reminded me, like the others said, of a kind of Shakespeare-esque poem. I didn't really like the He She parts, but ...