BondGirl007

Hey Esther! I really liked this poem a lot! It reminded me a lot of Shel Silverstein's work. If you haven't heard of him, look him up. He has some ...

Hey Rockey! So far I'm quite liking this story. I like how you changed the narrative from third person to her first person. I'm wondering if you're going to do ...

The Beginning: Noisy footsteps trampled through the metal corridors. Small red dots floated along the walls and piping, casting a haunted glow. Okay, so I'm not really getting what these ...

Hi there! Bond here to review! I must say I enjoyed this poem a lot. It's a little cheesy, but the girl in me loves it. The only thing I ...

Hey Ember! Congratulations you get to be my 200th review! :D Well I have to say, this is excellent. Really and truly excellent. You've got talent :) I love Vivica, ...

Hey Thane, the lyric forum is for lyrics you've written yourself, not songs you like ;). How about posting them in a blog instead. People will still see it, and ...

Well Emmy, it's short, and simple and as Freak said, pretty easily predictable, and really makes me feel nothing at all. Try reading some more poetry, its like a test, ...

Hey Penny! I actually quite like this, which is pretty rare for me, normally I hate lost love poems, but you did a very good job with this one, so ...

Okay, well the biggest thing here is the inconsistent rhyme. You have none in the beginning, then by the end you start rhyming. Pick on or the other, personally I ...

It was not often that I did this , but when I did I took it in full pleasure in it . That was until he showed up. If it ...

Hey there KAH! It's a little short, but that's okay, I have a few quick tips though. A light pops in front of me Then it slowly recedes Back into ...

The sand crunches underneath my baked feet; I am a Titan, the only one left. I don't think baked is really the right word here. It sounds strange. I carry ...

Hi there King! I'm Hope and I'll be reviewing today :D. Why run from that which we know will catch us? Hid e and you shall find the safety in ...

Okay I just had this whole review typed up, and then lost it, so I'm a little miffed right now. *Sigh* anyway, lets get on with it. Neon purple band ...

Hi there Trix! I really liked this story, you've got a very strong narrative and I really get the feeling of your MC. I was reminded of To Kill a ...