Bol

Wow wow wow. Because one 'wow' just doesn't do this piece justice. Super awesome, I love it. It really shows how frail and fragile life is, one moment you're screaming ...

Woah, nice story, mate. Bol here, and I just love stories like this that flip an overused cliche or common fairytale on its head and challenges it, very nice. Not ...

Ermahgerd, epic plot twist! So, Bol here, and that previous statement sums up my thoughts on this. Just so funny! From the first word I thought this would be one ...

Firstly, I'd say you should focus on paragraphing. A huge mass of words, which your story is right now, is quite overwhelming to a lot of people so I suggest ...

First off, great story. Love it, really. The description Bjeorvic and Dakrot were really striking to me, how sad and mournful it seemed at times and also how their efforts ...

Wow, man, this stuff is trippy. This is great, really striking and the kind of stuff that will make some people quite fearful to look in the mirror and others ...

Wow, nice story. Okay, so first off I love this because its so relatable and just the kind of stuff I went through. I grew up in Singapore and in ...

Nice story, I like it a lot. I really love stories written from animal POVs, if they're well written of course. In my mind two categories in animal POV writing, ...

Uh, wow, like just wow. The way you write and portray this character immediately conveys a sense of despair and loss. You can feel the sadness, it isn't some abstract ...

Hey there, here to leave a review on this excellent story. First off, I love how you wrote the start. Most people's impressions of hospitals are places that are filled ...

So, Pandemonium, hello. What can I say? Wow. I love stories like this, narrated by someone witty and the person you'd expect to nail you with a snide remark every ...

Uh... wow. This is one of the satirical pieces that I really love. Your writing is simple, but it works for these kinds of stories very well. The backstory was ...

Wow. This story, it's a work of art surely. You should've made it a poem instead, the way you write though. I like how the candle turns from something beautiful ...

I've a fancy for stories on this subject, far too little of their ilk on this website. But more to the point, I like your story and way of writing ...

You have talent. A lot of it. First thing's first, you nailed the opening. Most shorts I see I just brush off it they're too long for me or it ...