Bluecat

Hi! I'm just going to give a quick review for your piece. Right off the bat, I see the main character/story-teller as being very interesting. The reader learns enough to ...

I really liked this poem. I thought your first small paragraph was well written, for it seemed like a narration. I could easily imagine the thoughts of the girl, and ...

Hello! I'm going to do a review for your poem. First of all, I could easily imagine the setting of the poem, so great job! I'm guessing it's a doctors ...

Looking at your other pieces, it's obvious you have done a lot of hard work with this novel. I just am going to review your prologue to start. I think ...

First of all, welcome to YWS! I'm relatively new here as well, and I hope you enjoy the site! I think you did a nice job. I liked how you, ...

I very much liked your theme. I think everyone at some point in their lives should read something like this. First, I think you should change your title. You don't ...

I really liked your personification here, such as in the first couple of lines. I could easily imagine the scene, especially in the last stanza. You really did a good ...