BlueSunset

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The last line made me laugh :D . Also, I've seen that many people are doing haikus like this. They're really interesting. Huh. :D

Wow. :D Thanks for that review. That was really helpful, if I get around changing and improving on this poem I will fix that. Thanks again :D

Thank you, Bambi! Your review was helpful. :D Actually, the first letter in each line doesn't have to be capitalized - whatever the writer chooses. But thanks anyhow. ;)

Yes, I wanted to make the reader feel like the deaf person wanted to really remind you that they are deaf and that it is fine. I might fix it ...

Thanks so much for your review, I'll change some of the stuff you mentioned! I disagree to some of what you said, but everyone has their own opinions. :D :D

Nice job, Eternal! :D

XD Love that ending, @SnazzyPencil. :D

I'm glad you could give me some feedback, @Noelle! :D It was very helpful.

Thank you for your suggestions. ;)

Cool.

Thanks! What an honor to have this be your first read on YWS. :D

Thank you for pointing out what you like :D

The thing about that is that it might take up more syllables... I don't know. Thanks for the review, though :D

Thanks.. I don't know if I will be able to fix that. Thanks anyways :D