BlueJayWalker10

Totally fine! I made those mistakes ALLLLLLL the time before I finally learned when to and when not to put them in.

I got the name Winterhold from Skyrim, derrived from Winterhall. xD I'm a Skyrim nerd. The descriptions. . . Yeah, I had a hard time on that. At first I ...

Thanks for writing this review! It's always a pleasure to read your comments. About what's going on with Lionel and the twins, I believe I did say. Yeah, right here. ...

'Kay. Thanks for pointing that out to me! But didn't I explain what Lionel was wearing when he first came into the room? White shirt and a crimson tunic with ...

Oh, totally! I get what you mean. I realize that I have the problem where I forget to add some context and it makes it more difficult for the reader ...

Thank you very much for this review! I love reading your reviews. Thanks for pointing out a couple of my grammar errors--I can't believe I let that one before the ...

I thank you for the review! And I do know that I capitalize the words after I use a colon. It's the style of writing I was taught; when I ...

Thank you so much for the reviews on my first chapter! I would very much like to thank you for pointing out a few of my grammatical errors on this. ...