BlueGlow

Thanks for the review! I'm glad it had some impact on your thoughts. Have a great day!

Thanks for the kind words!

Its all good

Hey thanks for the kind words!

Thanks for the review and the suggestions!

Thank you for the kind words! I'm happy to see that this poem is open to interpretation!

Thanks for reading! The spacing was unintentional, guess it was a happy little accident.

Thanks for the criticism. Perhaps some of the wording could be improved. I'll take note of it for future revisions

Thanks for the in-depth review! Much appreciated!

Hey thanks for the in-depth review! Uunfortunately this is an unrevised rough draft and so still needs some work but I will take the advice you've given me and fix ...

Hey thanks for the in-depth review! I'm glad the atmosphere was properly conveyed!

Thanks for the review! Even line lengths are often omitted from my poems as sometimes I can't find a concise enough expression. In the future I hope to improve that ...

Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad I could illustrate such a concept!

Absolutely, "Soon, the snake came to live with the frogs in the grass and asked the king to give food for his daily pass." In this stanza pass doesn't really ...

Love this! Seriously, awesome work!