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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Once Sang the Wind

    Thanks for the review! I understand how you might not be able to understand it in some parts - I'll try to fix that. Thank you for pointing it out! ...

    Aug 30, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Numb

    I%u2019m happy to hear I conveyed your meaning correctly! And no problem! :)

    Aug 30, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: cheery morning

    No problem! :D

    Aug 30, 2018
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, Dramatic Re: Black Rain

    Thank you so much!!

    Aug 21, 2018
  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Fate

    This is really beautiful!

    Aug 15, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mess

    Happy this helped! :D

    Aug 8, 2018
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, Dramatic Re: Black Rain

    Thanks!

    Aug 7, 2018
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, Dramatic Re: Black Rain

    Thanks so much for this review!

    Aug 7, 2018
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, Dramatic Re: Black Rain

    Hi all; I wrote this poem a few minutes ago, so this is the first draft I have come up with. Any help regarding the coherence of the meter and ...

    Aug 7, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: The Silver Queen

    Thanks for the review! :D

    Jul 23, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: The Silver Queen

    Thanks so much for the review! I'll work a little more on the flow. Thanks again!

    Jul 19, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: The Silver Queen

    Thanks so much!

    Jul 18, 2018
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Eht Use of Jniunga Rtpacheyse ni Dnreeclial

    "The star-crossed lovers archetype, introduced and popularized by Shakespeare’s work, is when two lovers are held apart by outside forces, something which also happens in the film, although Ella and

    Jul 5, 2018
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Eht Use of Jniunga Rtpacheyse ni Dnreeclial

    Hey! If it is helpful, I have a few more suggestions... "While nature is wild and unruly, it is also a tightly interconnected web as well, so the use of ...

    Jul 5, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: The Changing Stars (Chapter 1.1) (LMS)

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    Jul 2, 2018


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