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Re: Once Sang the Wind
Thanks for the review! I understand how you might not be able to understand it in some parts - I'll try to fix that. Thank you for pointing it out! ...
Thu Aug 30, 2018 9:39 pm -
Re: Numb
I%u2019m happy to hear I conveyed your meaning correctly! And no problem! :)
Thu Aug 30, 2018 12:45 am -
Re: cheery morning
No problem! :D
Thu Aug 30, 2018 12:44 am -
Re: Black Rain
Thank you so much!!
Tue Aug 21, 2018 5:21 pm -
Re: Fate
This is really beautiful!
Wed Aug 15, 2018 4:30 am -
Re: Mess
Happy this helped! :D
Wed Aug 08, 2018 5:32 pm -
Re: Black Rain
Thanks!
Tue Aug 07, 2018 7:16 pm -
Re: Black Rain
Thanks so much for this review!
Tue Aug 07, 2018 11:01 am -
Re: Black Rain
Hi all; I wrote this poem a few minutes ago, so this is the first draft I have come up with. Any help regarding the coherence of the meter and ...
Tue Aug 07, 2018 3:08 am -
Re: The Silver Queen
Thanks for the review! :D
Mon Jul 23, 2018 7:58 pm -
Re: The Silver Queen
Thanks so much for the review! I'll work a little more on the flow. Thanks again!
Thu Jul 19, 2018 11:07 am -
Re: The Silver Queen
Thanks so much!
Wed Jul 18, 2018 3:18 pm -
Re: Eht Use of Jniunga Rtpacheyse ni Dnreeclial
"The star-crossed lovers archetype, introduced and popularized by Shakespeare’s work, is when two lovers are held apart by outside forces, something which also happens in the film, although Ella and
Thu Jul 05, 2018 1:58 am -
Re: Eht Use of Jniunga Rtpacheyse ni Dnreeclial
Hey! If it is helpful, I have a few more suggestions... "While nature is wild and unruly, it is also a tightly interconnected web as well, so the use of ...
Thu Jul 05, 2018 1:39 am -
Re: The Changing Stars (Chapter 1.1) (LMS)
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Mon Jul 02, 2018 11:51 pm