BlondieMissyAngel

Thanks for the formatting idea! Any way specifically you feel would make it look better? It's supposed to be more like a script than a story.

Haha thank you so much!

I put in the short description that is was from Dr. Horrible and Harry Potter and that no copy wright was intended, been there since day one so I think ...

Thanks so much for the review =] if I may ask why it was confusing at the beginning... have you read any of the other chapters? Thanks again *Blondie*

Hey Cookie, TEAR TEAR TEAR talk about friken hectic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey guys, The reason this poem didn't flow is cause it's ment to be like her life was/is. It's choppy and doesn't fit together nicely. I don't know if I'm ...

hehe love it!

Hey guys, feel free to leave a comment. This isn't anything personal to me, just a random scene that I made up. feel free to leave and honest opinion!

hehe Sakura, The reason Amiria keeps calling her Grandfather by his name is kind of to show respect. Even though he IS her grandfather, he is also the chief. The ...

Tiger, ok how's this new version? I added some things to it! Let me know!

To my brother, whilst telling me the errors that Microsoft Word has found helps ME, it won't help you. look through to find mistakes YOU see then make sure that ...

Hey Ziggie! Thank you so much! I was thinking that it all looked a bit mushed together I just wasn't sure as to what I could do to fix it! ...

Thanks for the review Blue! Well I made some changes so tell me what you think! Regards ~Missy~

Hey Blue! hope the re-edited version is better! Regards ~Missy~

Lupis, What I haven't clarified, but what you will find out later in the story is that this "Prologue" is actually a snippet of a different chapter so with that ...