Blink

Right, TSun, your response is immature and childish. I'm not a great writer, but this is the opinion of a reader who happens to critique, and if I'm not interested, ...

Probably. I'd like this to become a novella, but to be honest, I've neglected my writing for so long that I've sort of lost my trail of thought... we'll see. ...

Thanks, you too! EmmaJane--t'ank you. =] I'm trying to make things I write clearer, but have, for a long while, been failing. :) lilymoore--psh, you didn't have to review it ...

Hey! I haven't read it, but it's on my will-force-myself-to-read list. Also, it's Joseph Conrad, not Jason. :wink:

Hey! I was super excited when I saw I had a review. :D Thanks for the great advice! Anyway, Blink, I really do enjoy this story and I think it’s ...

Thanks for that. =) I've been continuing with this but I've had loads of stuff to do so I haven't done much more. I'll be picking the pace up again ...

Hey, thanks, Alainna! This is really just the introduction; it becomes far less clunky later on, as the rest of it is just a story about the bird in a ...

You caught me at a good time because a) I was looking for something to review and b) I was just reading about Lucid Dreaming for my presentation on it. ...

Hello. =) That's mostly what I was now. This is one strange sentence. You've got present, then past, then present.

No replies? Well, that shan't do! Though the tile beneath my feet was cold = "although" because "though" just means "but", and it doesn't indicate that there's another clause to ...

Hah, thanks. I do like the mood idea. That could work quite nicely. Thank you again. :D

Thanks for the reviews, guys. JosephDean: Thanks. As far as I am aware, you can user either form of punctuation for dialogue... but thanks for your input. =) Evi: I ...

The Road, and No Country for Old Men. They're quite southern in form, but great books that make the characters seem so American. Best Blinky

Yes! It was intended to come out in November last year, but then December, and just "2009". So it's already been filmed; just waiting for it to come out. =)

Hey Jiggity! =} I've attached a file with all the nitpicks in it, and here I'll just focus all the other comments and whatnot. in another life they might have ...