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Re: 50 hours straight
Awkward because I just noticed I copied and pasted it twice.
Jul 10, 2013 -
Re: The Absence of Pain
Thanks for the review. The poem is about painkillers, which are the 'drugs'.
Jul 9, 2013 -
Re: Concaptivus - prologue
I do not think you understand what "prologue" means my dear sir. It is not a blurb.
Jul 7, 2013 -
Re: Sky Haven
Thanks, I might make an elaborated version that doesn't follow any music. That way I have more freedom with how many lines I can place and the syllables.
Jun 29, 2013 -
Re: wasteland
I really like this. Could you give me the chord progressions? Then I could review you both musically and lyrically. I heard this one progression that sounded quite sweet but ...
Jun 11, 2013 -
Re: Jealous Leaves of Ivy
Nice poem. I don't see how the title relates at all though. Enlighten me?
Jun 9, 2013 -
Re: Temporary/Removal
Thank you starlinks. I am surprised you like it so much as that is my first draft. I am sort of nervous about the commas because of when I write ...
Jun 8, 2013 -
Re: Countdown.
If you were confused and did not understand this then why did you review it? I don't mind reviews but I was not searching for them. I wrote this as ...
Jun 5, 2013
