Blackwood

I think you could have them age as you go

She is acting 12................

Edited~~~~~~~

I think this is great. Good work. Personally I'd enjoy it more if they were younger, like 12, and not "teens..." grrr...especially since you said 'boy' and 'girl' at the ...

You spelled colour wrong!

Well, well... who's a sexy poet now?

I still think that it is far too unrealistic. There is just simply not way, that even in a futuristic society, they would kill people based on their lineage without ...

The piece doesn't sound like a three year old wrote it, but your review does.

I guess you have to look deeper and consider the circumstances and what you would do/say if you were him.

Wow, what's with you?

Because I was trying to make the reader dislike both of them equally and have some sympathy for Tommy but everyone hates him

Ah I failed

Well now I am discouraged me from my dreams and aspirations

It was done well and fine, but it was unrelated and didn't really have anything to do with the story in the long run.

Sorry so man typos in that.