Blackwood

This was the last student....

This is the final character of the group and I was going to end them there. I am a bit worried about it being slow getting into it, and I ...

Thank you I love you.

It was pretty good considering English is your second language. Just a few things here and there. I think that there are different ways to write dialogue punctuation, so you ...

There is a little "-" between the paragraphs to show the scene breaks.

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Thank you. Fantastic review.

I'mmm just a cynical romantic. :p it felt like forever. Maybe it was because of the gap in reading it.

Thanks, I love you too.

Yeah there are. I'm not going to post them until the cost goes down though.

Yes, there will be more. I'm thinking about writing one right now. And maybe you should just leave it as a comment if it can't be a review. XD

I think you should put Brazil's name at the top like you did with his first perspective change because one naturally begins to read the first paragraph as Parker without ...

Just leaving a comment here. You are a very good writer. In regards to this chapter, I feel it was weaker than the previous ones. I wasn't as enthralled in ...

Thank you very much for the review.

Lol Veeren where are your capitals?