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Re: Suicide Boy
Do you read?
Jun 5, 2014 -
Re: Suicide Boy
I was thinking of you when I wrote it.
Jun 5, 2014 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: Intruder
Chen Chen is the nickname Beauregard gives Chen because he's childish.
Jun 5, 2014 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: Intruder
I'M NOT AMERICAN DON'T YOU DARE TRY AND MAKE ME AMERICAN. Oh and thanks for the review. :P
Jun 4, 2014 -
Re: Red and Black
Ok even if its obvious you should still put who it is. (Even if its at the end)
Jun 4, 2014 -
Re: Red and Black
Maybe it is obvious and I just skim read it... but still >.>
Jun 4, 2014 -
Re: Red and Black
It's not obvious. You should still tell who it is.
Jun 4, 2014 -
Re: Shattered Steel
I just want to say that the beginning has really improved. I don't have time to read much further but good work.
Jun 3, 2014 -
Re: Red and Black
You need to specify who this is. 1. I have noooooooooooooooo idea who it is. 2. It's a specification of entry.
Jun 3, 2014 -
Re: Hunger Games Entry
You do realize its supposed to be her?
Jun 3, 2014 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: Our Sir
You're entire first half is answered in the previous chapters. This chapter leads on from what happened last one so you'll know what had just happened. Hmm with the dialouge ...
May 27, 2014 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: Our Sir
Maybe you're confused because this is chapter 12. :P But thank you.
May 27, 2014 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: Seven Soldiers
I sort of made that unclear... Well, the title was a last minute thing.
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: Seven Soldiers
Actually, the seventh solider is the mannequin.
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last Preveiw: Sir
Eh I just noticed that this chapter is slightly different from the other ones. They change between, sorry.
May 22, 2014