Blackwood

A story about goblin. I really like it, you are really in the mind of the simple creature. What I don't like is how you dive us into it too ...

If this is your first attempt at poetry then job well done! This is an excellent try. I like the idea and message that you try to convey and what ...

Hmmm I really liked this, it was quite a nice read. I am assuming its another one of those sort of apocalyptic worlds or dytopia ones. They are clearly hiding. ...

Lol nice link there. What does coupondropdown pay you? I just wan't to go over the first paragraph with you. I want you to re-read it carefully. It was dark. ...

Hahahahahhaha When I read the first two lines, I thought that it was going to be something like everyone started hating you because you painted or drew something so horrible/bad/grotesque ...

I get that its a deep poem for you, and I don't think you should change it, but let me just point out something. You're 13. I like the rhythm ...

Alright, Hey there, I am reviewing on this page for the sake of getting it out of the greenroom, but I am reviewing for what is written in "Chappie 1" ...

Your writing is kind of dismissive, but I actually really like it. I read a couple of the chapters of this story already,, and I found it interesting. This being ...

Here comes a review. You spelled 'sort' wrong somewhere in there by the way (when you were talking about a chili) Hmmmm.... I think your writing form is ok, as ...

Mmmmmmmm hmmmm hmmmm mmm hmmm I am undecided. I guess you could say I like it. I don't dislike it. It's probably because I just read an amazing short story ...

How sweet. I really enjoyed reading this. Good job to you. It is rare I find anything good enough to make me enjoy reading it top to bottom but this ...

I found this quite well written compared to the last thing of yours I read. Is this the same thing as that byt he way? I'm liking it all except ...

You had me on the edge of my chair the whole time. I was sure this would end sadly. Happy endings. I must admit, it made me feel good. I ...

Who is he? You should say his name at the start. I'm writing bob because I don't know his name. It had been two weeks since their argument and Layla ...

I enjoyed this a ton. I have always had a think about being the villain, both literally and in more realistic cases, and this is great example. This really can ...