Blackwater

Hey voidbrain! I like your username ;) this is blackwater here for a review! First off, welcome to YWS! Hope you write many more pieces. I'd like to say that ...

Hey! Blackwater here for a review :D I truly loved your poem. I love how you begin the poem, "I remember, last summer" It gives a beautiful nostalgic feeling to ...

Hey Samia! This is blackwater here for a review. I'd like to agree with niteowl about the bold. The meaning of the poem is sort of lost because of that. ...

Hey, LMJRayner! This is blackwater here for a review. First off, I'd like to point out how you haven't bothered to use any punctuations. "the air in the breeze was ...

Hey, this is black water here for a review! First off, I'd say that the only good things in this piece of poetry are the usage of words(which are yet ...

As kayfortnight pointed out, I too agree that structure is a big part of good poetry. The poem would be a lot clearer if it were properly spaced and organized ...