Bjorn

One step ahead of you, Rei! While washing the dishes I had a brilliant idea for the story! :D

It's then an unfortunality that I have based this man on myself? I do think too much, in fact! I feel a little offended by your opening statement, are you ...

Double gack. Some of your suggestions I may adhere to... Thanks for reviewing it though! To be honest it only has another few paragraphs to go before it's done! It's ...

Haven't read through this version, but I've got a suggestion nonetheless! Instead of making that first little part, about the Chair, "Chapter 1", why not make it the prolouge? It ...

The LOTR Movies were half baked crap which were better than the raw crap books. THe books are drawn out and long winded to the Nth degree, every single page ...

The LOTR Movies were half baked crap which were better than the raw crap books. THe books are drawn out and long winded to the Nth degree, every single page ...

Ahh, thank you very much Sohini! For the congrats, and for pointing out those mistakes! One can only go so far without making one... :roll: Faery, though, is quite correct, ...

I agree with changing "was" to "were" in those two cases. I also thing that one chunk you pointed out is a little too drawn out. Could it be shortened? ...

No problemo!

Thank ye *bows*

I've written a few pages for this story this past month which I shall type up and post here when I'm not lazy (after saying that I feel like doing ...

Interesting...I suppose because Harry Potter is just in that time-period that most of you choosers of it are in. I mean you can all relate to it-it was written more ...

The first stanza does have a rhym pattern! Tamburasac, and Dance; thus: a b c a Or did you not see the note? "*(Note-Tamburasac is pronounced: Tahm-Boo-Rash-Atz)" the c, in ...

And for that act, that act which should have pleased the gods which we Men of the North so truthfully worship, I was exiled. Why? Why should have that monk ...

Hoder and Baldur? It's ok, but I think my favourite story is when Thor, and the two children that Thor takes with him, go to Jotunheim to Utgard-Loki's. He is ...