Bjorn

Ahaha, yes, which is why I was surprised this re-surfaced. Thanks anyhow! :)

You were like a swift sunrise before my eyes; But with it came a swift sunset... Now darkness envelopes my being, And my heart is being eaten by your lies...

Thank-you!

Oh please don't! (Hate me). I don't try to succeed at what I attempt - I merely attempt it for my own amusement. However, this poem was part of an ...

Ah, thanks Sohini. :) As for clomb, yes, it is a word. It's an archaic past-tense form of climb. And as for a capital 'e' after "And lo!", I've seen ...

My, when did this resurface?! Hahaha :o Please, please, don't get worked up about what Brad said. Where would we be without him? I admire his bluntness 8) Now I ...

Please, Please! I don't want any blood shed on my account! :o Thank-you Dreamy, yes, he does! Perhaps it can get stale after a while, but his works are just ...

Thank-you very much Sohini! You are without a doubt my number one fan! (If I may be so bold as to say so). :lol:

Oh, and you might want to capitalize R heans.

Ah, thank-you! :)

(Excuse the long title, but this free-write was supposed to encompass all that is in it. Unfortunately my writing broke off at the overthrow part, and so at a later ...

Because people took the time to read and critique your work?

Ahhh... I can relate. Maybe a little too wordy to be a poem, or at least a proper poem, but it struck :)

Well there you go Sohini!

Haha, a great piece of Russian legend, retold and remastered by a skilful hand! I'm no stranger to this myth (duh), and... what Imp said ^_~