Bittersweet

Hiya there! Welcome to YWS! I'm Bitter, Bitta, Sweet, or Holly, whatever! As for the story, here are some small corrections: Due to the graphic nature of the account, those ...

Funny, but I didn't find this "cracktastic" at all. xD It is... unique, but that's what I loved. I've never read anything told like this, and I'm very curious about ...

Eeeh! This is excellent, Ringo! You have such a clever, deep, and sophisticated way to put words into poems. I respect you for that one, dude. 8) I only found ...

Hello there, Jclifton! I'm gonna dive into the boring stuff first: “I rather dislike it when you try and peek at my cards, Mr. Strithington,” said Julius Rudd. His eyes, ...

Oh wow. That's extremely suspenseful. I was hooked from the beginning, and by the end I was like "Oh holy crap!" Anyway, as always, your writing is very believable. I ...

Hello there! I really liked this poem. It is very frank and cute, maybe a little cheesy (but cheesy can be good). One thing I must say though is that ...

After the confusion, here I am, reading your story. Sorry it took me a while. I've been having a hard time getting to it. Anyway, first I'm going to all ...

Hullo Jared! JFW stole everything I was going to correct. -eye spasm- So I'll just go to the praise/comments stuff right now. I was laughing the whole first part. I ...

This is a very good piece of writing. I didn't find any mistakes and such excapt for just one part that kind of disrupted the flow: His accent was beautiful, ...

Hullo, there! -waves- I'm going to dive into the mistakes first: I, Persephone, who was the bringing forth of life in spring, I who stood among the powerful and the ...

Wow! You're an excellent writer! I must say I know exactly what goes on in a creepy stalker/madman's mind now. Hee hee. Anyway, I love your descriptions. They are very ...

Hiya! First I'm going to dive into my issues with this: -What's with Michael? I mean, I know he's there to explain these things, but I feel like he's kind ...

Sorry, October, but this doesn'tto be shortened! It's perfecto! Anywhoo, Ringo, this is by far my favorite of all of your poems. So rich and lovely with words. It's reads ...

Hullo there! This story is kind of heartwrenching. Don't worry, the good kind, I mean. I've never known or loved anyone blind, but I feel a very deep respect and ...

These things always giggle. Mostly because I'm a romantic and a writer, and I relate to these kinds of things. Anywhoo, nothing I have to say about this piece is ...