Bittersweet

Wow. That was a lovely poem. I only found one or two awkward lines: To the mute sea of hush This is one of those lines where you can see ...

Saintie! Strangely enough, I think this is the first thing I've reviewed of yours... Anyway, here's a few smallish mistakes. She was their angel, their perfect beauty-pageant-queen angel who could ...

Well, this made me shudder. It almost makes me sick, even. Which is very good (besides the slight gagging feeling trying to come up from the back of my throat. ...

First, I must say that I imagined I'd be rolling all over the floor and dying of laughter. It certainly was a surprise that the mood of the story was ...

Oh man, Jared, you have outdone yourself with this one! My sister came into my room wondering why I was laughing so hard! Anyway, this review will be pretty much ...

Hello there again, Oms! It's nice to be reading something of yours again. I'm not so sure how happy you are to be hearing from me again, however. Heh. I ...

Hey Miss Curly Q! :D Anyway, I might be correcting everything that has already been corrected, because I was too lazy to read the other reviews first... heh. Sorry. Ted ...

Hello omvsmars22! Welcome to YWS! So, first I'm going to dive into the not-so-fun stuff. Hee hee. I noticed a lot of silly little mistakes and such, but I've found ...

ENTIRELY NEW REVIEW!: ______________________ I must say this made a world's difference to this piece. I got a much better picture of what was going on in the murder scene, ...

Hello JFW! I've just got one mistake to show you... She ignored me, just threw her arms above her head and spun. Her yellow curls – golden under the afternoon ...

Hee hee. I just love the fact that this pretty much mocks all of the people who post Twilight fanfiction. I, personally, think that (fanfic) is what kind of ruined ...

Hello again, Sam! :D She wanted a slick-haired fiancée with a golden pocketwatch and polished black shoes. I think you mean 'fiance' (with the fancy E of course). The one ...

Well, you said this one wasn't as scary, which is true, but it definitely has the right mood and atmosphere. In fact, the phone call part and the ending really ...

Hiya, Sam! I enjoyed this part quite a lot! The last time he’d slept like that, he’d woken up tangled in his French teacher. I find this confusing. I think ...

Eeeh! Sumi, why the heck are you not happy with this? I can't get enough of your descriptions. They are lovely! This part wasn't quite as tell-y as the last ...