Birdy

I agree with the previous post. I liked this poem because it was unique, different. It had a decent ring to it, despite not rhyming. The pace was great. Even ...

Sure! I wouldn't mind that.

Alright, thanks. It isn't a real story, but it's based on events that have happened.

Thanks for reviewing! I feel quite confident in my writing now.

I'd like to ask you if my story seems to go by too quickly? I feel like it does, but I just want to make sure.

Ah thank you so much! I will definitely put some thought into that after a little while, so my mind can look at it from a new angle. Thank you ...

I feel like this was super cheesy, but I liked it, nonetheless! You're choice of words and your rhyming were both great. You left a constant rhythm in my head, ...