Biluata

Hi! Thanks so much for the review! I used 'accelerando' in the opening line because I wanted to sort of shove it in the reader's face that hey! this poem ...

Hi! Thank you so much for trying to review my work without letting your personal feelings on the matter get too much in the way. I really do appreciate the ...

Thank you!!!

Thank you so much for your kind words! I did struggle with the last line you mentioned quite a bit. The only reason I didn't go with "awfully" was because ...

Thank you so much for your kind words! I did struggle with the last line you mentioned quite a bit. The only reason I didn't go with "awfully" was because ...

Thank you much! Your comments were very helpful!

Hi! Just in case you're going to continue making reviews on poetry, the placement of commas and the splitting up of sentences is really a style choice on the part ...

You're very welcome! Have a fantastical day

I didn't know that! Do you write your poetry in Spanish, then and translate it to English or are you writing in English from the get-go? Sorry if that's impolite, ...

Sorry to be joining back into this little grammar tussle, but I think we're losing sight of what my original intention was. All I was saying is that it would ...

So sorry, no clue what I was thinking with it being filed under poetry. Twas early in the morning ^_^ What i was saying with "their" is that because you ...

Hi! Thanks for reviewing! I appreciate it. To clear a few things up, I didn't use stanzas on purpose. Also, I think that describing the subject of the poem detracts ...

Hi! Thanks for your review. I thought I'd clear a few things up. Flow is extremely important to me in poetry pieces but the choppiness was on purpose here. All ...

Heh. That's just me telling people to feel free to give me really harsh reviews if that's what they feel like doing ^_^

Remind me to review later, right now I have class, but I fully intent to come back and review. Don't let me forget! Marvelous piece.