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Re: Squirrel!
Hi there! I really like this poem. It is complex and not complex all at the same time. Okay, I'll slow down a little and explain what i mean. Sorry ...
Apr 3, 2015 -
Re: Hope In The Dark
Hi there. This is a very good poem with a very good concept. The rhyming couplet rhyme scheme for this poem worked really well. As an amateur at writing, the ...
Apr 3, 2015 -
Re: I Swear I Lived
I honestly think this is more than a rant of pent up emotions. I think it is beautiful and I can understand completely where you are coming from. It makes ...
Sep 5, 2014 -
Re: The Threads of Life.
I really like this, snippet perhaps? I really think that is has potential as the start of a great short story. I don't mean to sound cliche with the above ...
Sep 5, 2014
