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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Squirrel!

    Hi there! I really like this poem. It is complex and not complex all at the same time. Okay, I'll slow down a little and explain what i mean. Sorry ...

    Apr 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Hope In The Dark

    Hi there. This is a very good poem with a very good concept. The rhyming couplet rhyme scheme for this poem worked really well. As an amateur at writing, the ...

    Apr 3, 2015
  • Other » Realistic, Other Re: I Swear I Lived

    I honestly think this is more than a rant of pent up emotions. I think it is beautiful and I can understand completely where you are coming from. It makes ...

    Sep 5, 2014
  • Other » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Threads of Life.

    I really like this, snippet perhaps? I really think that is has potential as the start of a great short story. I don't mean to sound cliche with the above ...

    Sep 5, 2014


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