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Re: My Dead Husband's Mother's Day Present (Revised)
Hello and thank you for the review! I agree with you on what you said. I love all feedback. This only took an hour to write today, so I knew ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: My Greatest Fear
This piece was decent, but rather short. I think you should revise and make a little longer. Good idea though. Please check out some of my stuff sometime! Cheers and ...
May 6, 2011 -
Re: My Soul To Keep - Chapter 1
I thought this was a good beginning. Good work on getting detail in there! I like it. You have a few grammar problems and you use commas where they dont ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Flight 764-Chapter 2
Thank you for the review, but it would have been nice to see these occurances you are talking about. Maybe then I could change it, but to me I feel ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Flight 764-Chapter 3
LOL yeah I can see what you mean, but osama will appear later in the book...this chapter was about introducing you to "The gold digger" and to put humor into ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Flight 764-Chapter 1
Hi and thanks! Basically, I put the part about him being robbed by clyde for 2 reasons. 1, I wanted the reader to have a demonstration of a time when ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Something
This was good stuff. A few gramma errors but other than that it was nice. Keep up the good work. Maybe sometime you could review some of my work?
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: A Struggling Wanderer
I agree with the above post. But this is your poem, not mine. All in all I liked it alot and look forward to reading more. Please check out my ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: Flight 764-Chapter 1
Hey thanks for the review. The reason i spelled figger instead of figure is I wanted to the reader to know he talked that way, sort of red neckish. It ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: An Ode to My School
Good job! I liked it. Keep up the good work.
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: Violet Rain
Bravo. Nicely done. I really liked this. I didn't catch any spelling errors, and you picked a nice choice of words. Cheers. Keep up the good work.
Apr 23, 2011 -
Re: The Puppet Master (New Version)
I really liked this. You should check out my work. I think you may like it. Keep writing!
Apr 23, 2011 -
Re: Thirty Four Year Old Child
Way way way too many commas. Good idea, just polish it up some.
Apr 23, 2011 -
Re: Confession Is Good For The Soul (Part 2)
Thank you Lily! I have post part 3 on here. Hope you get to read it. And you are very right. Thank you for picking up on that for me! ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Confession Is Good For The Soul (Part 1)
Thank you so much skittles! I will change this stuff when I get home from work tonight. I did mean to put the things you were stating but after writing ...
Apr 22, 2011