BigBadBear

She could not, and would not, ever call the police. They had no telephone, and if her father would ever of caught her, then she would be in for it. ...

uh, this is really cool. The only thing I wonder is how old is Alexial? Cuz if she is like a teenager, that would be totally gross. Anway, other than ...

Great job Kimmy! There is not much that I can say, but that you are doing an excellent job. I'm glad that you are doing so well! BBB

Wow.. Very very cool. I really like your ending where it said, "As long as one Moon Child lived, there was Faith." I got major goosebumps there. This is fantastic! ...

Hey again! Once again, Kim hits the spot and beautifully writes this. It is fantastic! I cannot believe that you are this great of an author. No other mistakes that ...

*blushes* no.. we never really performed this play.. I was so happy, but then they said no, and I was so mad.. but it's a great play! BBB

How can there be a fourth one, if Max has already saved the world? Isn't that what Jeb said she was designed for? Hm..I don't like the idea of a ...

I don't think there is going to be a fourth one. It said on the cover that it was the end. What was so depressing about the 3rd one? I ...

Uh..what?

Uh..what?

Just try and picture something hard and difficult that you have to do... I was picturing like getting hit and whipped with a belt and stuff, and yeah.. stuff like ...

No, not rape... What father would rape their child? Anyway, I don't know what she had to go through, but let's just say that it wasn't fun.

Hey! I forgot to mention that the whole transe scene when the main girl can't control her words are cool. Keep at it!!! BBB

Yeah, I took it from the action/adventure to the romance.. Sorry about that

Awwwww... i feel like I am going to cry.. That was a perfect poem in every way. The ending made me feel happy, but yet sad. Great job! bigbadbear